Ollie (ollie_san) wrote in writingnet,
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Constructive criticism...

Hi evrybody! I just posted the start of what is opefully going to be something quite a bit longer than what it currently is over on my journal. It's really meant to be like the background of a characters community and how it formed, it's gonna be a part of the intro chapter probably, umm, could you all tell me what you think? Any observations etc would be much appreciated, thanks, Ollie San.
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